Autumn by Alice Cary: poem analysis & meaning

Autumn the full poem, lines numbered

Shorter and shorter now the twilight clips

The days, as through the sunset gates they crowd,

And Summer from her golden collar slips

And strays through stubble-fields, and moans aloud,

5Save when by fits the warmer air deceives,

And, stealing hopeful to some sheltered bower,

She lies on pillows of the yellow leaves,

And tries the old tunes over for an hour.

The wind, whose tender whisper in the May

10Set all the young blooms listening through th’ grove,

Sits rustling in the faded boughs to-day

And makes his cold and unsuccessful love.

The rose has taken off her tire of red—

The mullein-stalk its yellow stars have lost,

15And the proud meadow-pink hangs down her head

Against earth’s chilly bosom, witched with frost.

The robin, that was busy all the June,

Before the sun had kissed the topmost bough,

Catching our hearts up in his golden tune,

20Has given place to the brown cricket now.

The very cock crows lonesomely at morn—

Each flag and fern the shrinking stream divides—

Uneasy cattle low, and lambs forlorn

Creep to their strawy sheds with nettled sides.

25Shut up the door: who loves me must not look

Upon the withered world, but haste to bring

His lighted candle, and his story-book,

And live with me the poetry of Spring.

The poem in 60 seconds

Summer does not simply end in this poem. She slips her golden collar, wanders the stubble-fields moaning, and creeps back to try her old tunes whenever a warm spell fools her. Alice Cary spends six stanzas counting what autumn takes away. In the seventh, the speaker calls for the door to be shut.

Twilight cuts each day shorter as the days crowd through the gates of sunset. Summer, pictured as a woman, slips out of her golden collar and wanders the harvested fields, moaning. Only when a warm spell tricks her does she steal to a sheltered spot, lie on a pillow of yellow leaves and try her old tunes for an hour. The wind, whose tender whisper in May made the young blossoms listen, now sits rustling in the faded branches, a cold and unsuccessful lover. The rose has taken off her red dress, the mullein has lost its yellow flowers, and the meadow-pink bows her head to the frosty ground. The robin, busy all June and singing before the sun reached the treetops, has given way to the brown cricket. Even the rooster crows lonesomely, the stream is shrinking among the flags and ferns, the cattle are uneasy, and forlorn lambs creep to their straw sheds. In the last stanza the speaker says to shut the door. Whoever loves the speaker must stop looking at the withered world, bring a lighted candle and a storybook, and live the poetry of spring together.

Speaker & situation

SpeakerAn unnamed speaker who describes the countryside for six stanzas and only steps forward at the end. The speaker says “our hearts” in line 19 and “me” in lines 25 and 28, but the poem gives no name or other personal details.

Addressed toNo one for most of the poem. The command “Shut up the door” in line 25 speaks to an unnamed listener, and the lines that follow say what anyone who loves the speaker must do. “His” in line 27 may point to one beloved man, or it may be the older all-purpose pronoun for whoever that person is.

OccasionThe shortening days of autumn, when summer is over but a warm spell still comes now and then (lines 5–8). Alice Cary (1820–1871) was an Ohio-born poet who lived in New York with her sister Phoebe, also a poet. This poem was collected after her death in The Last Poems of Alice and Phoebe Cary (1874).

SettingFarm country in late autumn: harvested fields, a grove, a meadow, a shrinking stream, and sheds for cattle and lambs. In the last stanza the scene moves indoors, behind a shut door.

ToneWistful and gently mournful through the first six stanzas, with moments of tenderness. The last stanza turns firm and warm, almost defiant.

Form & sound

FormLyric poem; seven quatrains. The first two stanzas make one long sentence about Summer, stanzas 3 to 6 each take up a new sign of the season, and stanza 7 turns to the speaker.

MeterIambic pentameter, five beats to a line, handled with some freedom. Line 1 opens on a stressed syllable (“Shorter”), and the shortened “th’” in line 10 drops a syllable so the line stays close to ten.

Rhyme schemeABAB in every stanza (clips, slips; crowd, aloud). Pentameter quatrains rhymed this way are often called heroic quatrains. Most rhymes are full, but “grove” and “love” in lines 10 and 12 match only to the eye.

SoundLine 1 repeats “Shorter and shorter,” so the days seem to shrink step by step. Soft s sounds run through lines 3 and 4 (“Summer,” “slips,” “strays,” “stubble-fields”), and line 22 pairs “flag and fern.”

TextLine 2 reads “through the sunset gates” in the 1874 printing used here, while the exam text reads “though.”

Line by line what each part says and does

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Lines 1–8

Summer slips away

Twilight clips the days shorter as they crowd through the gates of sunset. Summer slips out of her golden collar and wanders the stubble-fields, moaning, except when a warm spell fools her. Then she steals to a sheltered spot, lies on pillows of yellow leaves and tries her old tunes for an hour.

How it worksThe two stanzas form a single sentence, so Summer’s decline and her brief false hope run together. The warm air “deceives” her in line 5, which makes the pleasant days of late autumn a kind of trick.
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Lines 9–12

The wind as a failed lover

In May the wind’s tender whisper made the young blossoms listen all through the grove. Now the same wind sits rustling in faded branches and makes “his cold and unsuccessful love.”

How it worksThe stanza sets spring against autumn inside one figure. The wind has kept its habits and only lost its season, so its courting now gets no answer.
3

Lines 13–16

The flowers lose their color

The rose has taken off her “tire of red,” using an old word for attire. The mullein has lost its yellow flowers, and the proud meadow-pink bows her head against the cold ground, “witched with frost.”

How it worksEach flower is given a body or a costume, so the frost seems to strip and bewitch living things rather than simply kill plants. The colors that vanish here, red and yellow, echo the “golden collar” of line 3 and the “yellow leaves” of line 7.
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Lines 17–24

Birds, stream and farm animals

The robin, busy all June and singing before the sun touched the highest branch, has given place to the brown cricket. Even the rooster crows lonesomely in the morning. The stream is shrinking among the flags (wild irises) and ferns, the cattle low uneasily, and forlorn lambs creep to their sheds.

How it worksSound now marks the change as much as sight. The robin’s “golden tune” gives way to a cricket, the rooster sounds lonely, and the farm animals grow restless as the cold comes on.
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Lines 25–28

Shut up the door

The speaker orders the door shut. Whoever loves the speaker must not look at the withered world, but must hurry to bring a lighted candle and a storybook and live “the poetry of Spring” with the speaker.

How it worksFor the first time the speaker gives a command and says “me.” The candle and the storybook answer the fading daylight and the lost songs of the earlier stanzas.

The turn

Lines 25

Lines 1 to 24 describe the season from outside, stanza by stanza. Line 25 turns to the speaker with a command, “Shut up the door,” and moves the poem indoors, from what autumn takes to what love and imagination can still offer.

Literary devices with line numbers

Personification

In lines 3 to 8, Summer is a woman who slips from her “golden collar,” strays, moans and lies “on pillows of the yellow leaves.” The golden collar can suggest a gold necklace, while slipping a collar and straying also suggest an animal getting loose. Either way, Summer is losing her hold on the land, and her grief makes the season’s end feel like a personal loss.

Extended metaphor

Lines 9 to 12 turn the wind into a suitor. In lines 9 and 10 his “tender whisper” made the May blossoms listen; in line 12 he makes “his cold and unsuccessful love” among bare branches. The figure shows the change of season through one character’s lost success.

Contrast of past and present

The poem keeps setting then against now: “in the May” and “to-day” in lines 9 and 11, “all the June” and “now” in lines 17 and 20. Each pairing sharpens the loss, because the reader sees what was there before.

Color imagery

Gold, yellow and red fill the early lines: the “golden collar” (line 3), the “yellow leaves” (line 7), the rose’s “tire of red” (line 13), the mullein’s “yellow stars” (line 14) and the robin’s “golden tune” (line 19). Most of these colors are named as they fade or are lost, and by line 20 the color left is the “brown” of the cricket.

Inverted syntax

Line 14 bends normal word order (“The mullein-stalk its yellow stars have lost”), and so does line 22, “Each flag and fern the shrinking stream divides,” where the order leaves open whether the stream divides the plants or the plants divide the stream. The twisted order keeps the rhymes in place and slows the reading.

Imperative mood

Line 25 opens with the poem’s only command, “Shut up the door,” followed by a rule: whoever loves the speaker “must not look / Upon the withered world” (lines 25–26). After six stanzas of watching, the blunt command and the rule that follows show the speaker choosing how to meet the season.

Themes in Autumn

The passing of the seasonsFalse hopeLove and imagination as shelterGrowing older

The passing of the seasons

The poem records autumn through many small losses: shorter days, faded flowers, an absent robin, restless animals. Nothing violent happens. The season ends as a slow draining of light, color and song.

False hope

In lines 5 to 8 the warmer air “deceives” Summer, and she tries her old tunes for only an hour. In lines 9 to 12 the wind still courts but fails. Both images suggest that the ways of spring no longer work, however much the season’s figures cling to them.

Love and imagination as shelter

The ending does not deny that the world is withered. It chooses to stop looking and to spend the dark season with someone who loves the speaker, a candle and a book. The phrase “the poetry of Spring” (line 28) can mean poems about spring, or the feeling of spring kept alive through stories.

Growing older

Many readers also take autumn as a picture of later life, when youth, like summer, lies behind a person. The poem never says so directly, so this remains a reading rather than a stated fact.

Images and symbols

The door

Shutting the door in line 25 separates the “withered world” outside from a warm, lit room. It marks a choice about where to look.

The candle and the story-book

The “lighted candle” in line 27 replaces the fading daylight of line 1, and the “story-book” replaces the robin’s lost song. Together they stand for the warmth and imagination that can carry a person through the cold months.

The cricket

The “brown cricket” of line 20 takes the robin’s place. Its drab color and small size stand for the plainer, thinner life of autumn.

Patterns

Songs and sounds. The poem tracks the season through sound: Summer’s moaning (line 4) and “old tunes” (line 8), the wind’s whisper and rustling (lines 9 and 11), the robin’s tune giving way to the cricket (lines 19–20), the lonesome rooster and lowing cattle (lines 21 and 23). The last line answers them all with “poetry.”

Courtship. Love runs from the wind’s failed courting (line 12) to the one who loves the speaker (lines 25–27). Outside, love is cold and unsuccessful; indoors, it arrives carrying a lighted candle.

Tensions

Outside vs. inside. Six stanzas look out at a withering landscape, and the seventh shuts the door on it. The poem sets the cold, fading world against a warm room where love and stories still hold spring.

The ending

How Autumn ends, explained

The last stanza breaks the pattern of the first six. Until line 24 the speaker mostly watches and reports, and the only sign of a person is “our hearts” in line 19. Line 25 opens with a command, “Shut up the door,” and the speaker says “me” for the first time. Whoever loves the speaker must not look at “the withered world” but must hurry to bring a lighted candle and a storybook, “And live with me the poetry of Spring.” The details answer earlier losses. The candle makes up for the daylight that twilight clips away in line 1. The storybook stands in for the robin’s lost song. The warm companion contrasts with the wind of lines 9 to 12, whose love outdoors is “cold and unsuccessful.” Readers take this turn in more than one way. One reading sees strength: the speaker accepts that the season has ended and keeps spring alive through love and imagination, much as art can hold what time takes. Another reading hears something more fragile. The speaker never argues that the world is still lovely; the rule is simply not to look at it, and the shut door becomes a refuge from a loss that cannot be undone. Both readings fit the words. Spring is gone from the fields, but the last line says it can still be lived indoors, as poetry.

“And Summer from her golden collar slips / And strays through stubble-fields, and moans aloud”

Lines 3–4. Summer becomes a figure who slips loose and wanders, grieving, through the harvested fields. The personification makes the end of the season feel like a loss someone suffers.

“Sits rustling in the faded boughs to-day / And makes his cold and unsuccessful love.”

Lines 11–12. The wind, once a tender whisperer in May, is now a failed suitor. The stanza compresses the change from spring to autumn into one figure.

“Has given place to the brown cricket now.”

Line 20. The robin’s “golden tune” gives way to a small brown creature, a quiet sign that color and song are leaving the year.

“Shut up the door: who loves me must not look / Upon the withered world, but haste to bring / His lighted candle, and his story-book, / And live with me the poetry of Spring.”

Lines 25–28. The turn. The speaker stops describing and gives orders, choosing love, light and stories over watching the world wither.

Common misreadings

MythThe poem is only a description of autumn scenery.

ActuallySix stanzas describe the season, but the last stanza turns to the speaker, who gives commands and chooses love, candlelight and stories over watching the “withered world.” The description builds toward that choice.

MythThe warm days in lines 5 to 8 mean summer is coming back.

ActuallyThe warmer air “deceives” Summer. It comes only “by fits,” in brief spells, and she tries her tunes for just “an hour,” so these lines describe false hope, not a return.

MythBecause it appeared in The Last Poems, the poem must be about Cary’s own death.

ActuallyThe book came out after Cary died in 1871, but the poem never mentions death or illness. It describes autumn and a speaker’s response to it. Reading autumn as a figure for later life is possible, but the text does not tie the speaker to Cary.

AP practice a poetry prompt in the exam's style

In Alice Cary’s “Autumn,” a speaker traces the fading of a country landscape stanza by stanza and then closes the door on it. Read the poem carefully, then write an essay that analyzes how Cary uses literary elements and techniques to convey a complex perspective on seasonal loss and what can outlast it.

What a strong response notices

The personification of Summer in lines 3–8, including the warm air that “deceives” her in line 5.
The wind as a failed lover in lines 9–12, and the contrast between “the May” and “to-day.”
The draining of color from the “golden collar” (line 3) and the “tire of red” (line 13) to the “brown cricket” (line 20).
The shift at line 25, where the speaker gives commands and says “me” for the first time.
The candle, storybook and “poetry of Spring” in lines 27–28 as an answer to the twilight of line 1.

Practice prompt written by StoryBites, not taken from a College Board exam. See the AP Literature free-response guide for how answers are scored.

Test yourself

1. What does twilight do to the days in lines 1–2?

2. Why does Summer lie on “pillows of the yellow leaves” and try her old tunes?

3. How is the wind presented in lines 9–12?

4. What has taken the robin’s place by line 20?

5. What must the one who loves the speaker do in the last stanza?

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Answer

Explain it like I’m 12

This poem is about the end of summer and the start of the cold season. The poet pretends Summer is a woman who wanders the empty fields, sad that her time is over. The wind is like someone in love whose sweet whispers worked in spring but do not work anymore. Flowers lose their colors, and the robin is gone, with a brown cricket in its place. The farm animals seem uneasy as the weather turns cold. At the end, the speaker says to shut the door and stop looking at the dying world outside. Instead, someone who loves the speaker should bring a candle and a storybook, so they can enjoy spring together through stories.

Compare & connect

Sonnet 73

William Shakespeare

Shakespeare also uses autumn and twilight, with yellow leaves on cold boughs where birds no longer sing, to picture loss. His speaker ends by telling the loved one that seeing this decline makes their love stronger, while Cary’s speaker asks a loved one to come in with a candle and a book.

Ode on a Grecian Urn

John Keats

Keats praises carved boughs that can never shed their leaves or bid the spring goodbye. Both poems suggest that art can keep a spring that nature cannot.

On Summer

George Moses Horton

Another American seasonal poem in rhymed quatrains. Horton looks at the heat and plenty of summer and closes on the grain the fields yield on the eve of autumn, just where Cary’s poem begins.

Discussion and essay prompts:

💬 Discussion questions

What is Autumn by Alice Cary about
How is Summer personified in Autumn by Alice Cary
What does the wind represent in Autumn by Alice Cary
How does Autumn explore the theme of the passing of the seasons?
How does Autumn explore the theme of false hope?
What is the central conflict in Autumn, and how does it shape the ending?

✎ Essay prompts

Analyze how Alice Cary develops the theme of the passing of the seasons in Autumn. Support your argument with specific evidence from the text.
Examine the significance of the door in Autumn. What does it represent, and how does it deepen the work’s meaning?
How does Alice Cary use personification to shape the reader’s experience of Autumn?
Some readers assume that the poem is only a description of autumn scenery. Argue for or against this interpretation, using evidence from the text.

Key questions students ask

What is Autumn by Alice Cary about
How is Summer personified in Autumn by Alice Cary
What does the wind represent in Autumn by Alice Cary
Where is the shift in Autumn by Alice Cary
What does live with me the poetry of Spring mean
What is the rhyme scheme of Autumn by Alice Cary

Analysis is original StoryBites commentary. The poem is printed from The Last Poems of Alice and Phoebe Cary (New York: Hurd and Houghton, 1874), checked against page scans. It is in the public domain.